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The chart below illustrates the average number of hours spent on housework per day by four different groups of people in 1985, 1995, and 2005.
按照<數值大小>分段:
- Body 1:unemployed women、women with part-time employment【數值較高】
- Body 2:women with full-time employment、men with full-time employment【數值較低】
開頭段
The bar chart compares the average daily hours devoted to household chores by four groups—unemployed women, women with part-time jobs, women working full-time, and men employed full-time—in three years: 1985, 1995, and 2005.
概述段
Overall, unemployed womenconsistently devoted the most timeto housework across all the given years,whilefull-time working menspent the leastthroughout the period.Whilethe time spent on houseworkremained relatively stablefor most groups, minor fluctuations were observed.
思路要點:
- Unemployed women做家務時間一直最高
- Men with full-time employment做家務時間一直最低
- 整體數值較為平穩,但有輕微波動
Body paragraph 1
It is notable that two groups contributed more to household tasks. Unemployed womenspent the most time indomestic tasks during the 20-year period, beginning at 7 hours in 1985. This figuredipped slightlyto 6.8 hours in 1995,beforerising back to7 hours by 2005.In comparison, part-time working women devoted 6 hours per day to household chores in all the three years,ranking secondin terms of time spent on housework.
思路要點:unemployed women、women with part-time employment【數值較高】
- 有兩組人做家務時間較久
- unemployed women:1985年7hours→小幅度下降到1995年的6.8 hous→2005年小幅度上升回7hours
- women with part-time employment:1985-2005年間數值不變,平穩在6hours
Body paragraph 2
In contrast, full-time working adults spent considerably less time on domestic duties. Forfull-time employed women, the averagedropped significantlyfrom 3 hours in 1985 to 2 hours in 1995,followed bya modest rise to2.5 hours in 2005.Meanwhile, full-time working mensaw a gradual increasein the time spent on chores,reaching1.2 hours in 2005.
思路要點:women with full-time employment、men with full-time employment【數值較低】
- 全職工作的人做家務時間較少
- women with full-time employment:1985年3hours→顯著下降到1995年達到2hours→2005年小幅度上升到2.5hours
- men with full-time employment: 1985到2005年間小幅度上升到1.2hours
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