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The charts below give information about education in Singapore from the years 2000 to 2010.

主體段分段：一圖一段

開頭段

The bar chart compares the number of school years for males and females in Singapore from 2000 to 2010, while the pie charts illustrate changes in the highest level of education attained during the same period.

概述段

Overall, both gendersexperienced an increase inthe length of education over the decade,contributing toa rise in the overall educational attainment in Singapore between 2000 and 2010.

思路要點(diǎn)：

- 男女的受教育實(shí)踐都上升

- 新加坡整體教育水平上升

Body paragraph 1

In terms of schooling years,men consistentlyhad a longer duration of education thanfemales throughout the given period. Males’ schooling yearsrecorded a gradual increase, rising slightly from9 years in 2000 to 10.5 years in 2010.In contrast, females had 8 years of education from 2000 to 2003,after whichthere was a noticeable climb to9 years by 2010.

思路要點(diǎn)：

- 男性受教育時間始終高于女性

- Males：2000年至2010年小幅度上升

- Females：2000-2002年數(shù)值不變→到2010年顯著上升

Body paragraph 2

According to the pie charts,the proportion of people with university qualificationsexhibited the most significant growth,rising sharplyfrom 21.1% in 2000 to 44.1% in 2010. The percentage of diploma and professional qualification holdersalsoincreased, but more moderately,climbing marginallyfrom 27.7% to 33.9%.Conversely, the proportion of people with secondary educationhalved to13.4%, and the figure for below-secondary groupplunged tomerely 8.6% during the same period.

思路要點(diǎn)：

- University Qualification：急劇上升

- Diploma and professional qualification：小幅度上升

- Secondary education：下降了一半

- Below secondary：急劇下降

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