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The tables below show the working time of males and females in different regions in the year of 2002.

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開頭段

The table compares the average working hours for men and women in three countries (Greece, the Netherlands, and the UK) as well as the European average in 2002.

概述段

Overall, men tended towork longer hours thanwomen in full-time jobs,whereasgender differences in part-time employment varied by country. In both full-time and part-time roles, people in Greeceworked the longest hoursacross all countries.

思路要點(diǎn)：

- Full-time中大基本都是men>women，但part-time不同國家男女?dāng)?shù)值高低各不相同

- Greek的工作時(shí)長都是最高

Body paragraph 1

In terms of full-time employment, the European average for men (40.4 hours)was slightly higher thanthat for women (39.2 hours). Greecerecorded the highest gender disparity, with men working 42.5 hours,compared to39.9 hours for women.In contrast, the UKshowed the smallest gender gap, with men working 37.5 hours and women 37 hours. The Netherlands was the only country where full-time hourswere equalfor both genders(38 hours).

思路要點(diǎn)：Full-time

- European average：men(40.4)輕微超過women(39.2)

- Greece：男女差距最大

- UK：男女差距最小

- Netherlands：唯一一個(gè)男女工作時(shí)長相等的國家

Body paragraph 2

In part-time roles,both genders in the three countriesworked fewer hours thanEuropean average.Among them, in Greece, part-time workersrecorded the highest working hours, with men averaging 30 hours—0.7 hours more than women.A similar pattern was observed inthe UK, where men worked 29 hours,in contrast to28 hours for women. The Netherlands, however,exhibited an opposite trend, where womenworked nearly an hour more thanmen, with 29.3 and 28.3 hours respectively.

思路要點(diǎn)：Part-time

- 三個(gè)國家男女工作時(shí)長都低于European average

- Greece：男女?dāng)?shù)值都最高，men(30 hours)輕微超過women

- UK：男女差距和Greece相似

- Netherlands：women>men

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